Saturday, October 05, 2024

Rivals in Our Trenches

This thought experiment was inspired by my life long love of the Frost poem, Mending Wall. And as I see the toxic environment we live in on social media, I just pray for peace- civil discourse, and respect. And both sides are at fault!

Before I built a wall I’d ask to know
What I was walling in or walling out,
And to whom I was like to give offense.

Link to the song:

Rivals in Our Trenches


We built these walls so high, brick by stubborn brick

You stand your ground, and I stand mine, we never seem to click

We see the same horizon, but it looks so different here

You're calling out your logic, and I just cover my ears

Every answer's a question, but neither one replies

Caught up in our echoes, we only hear our sides

Rivals in our trenches, staring across the line

We’re just two stubborn hearts, convinced that we're both right

No trust, no truth, no healing, just distance and despair

We're mending walls between us, and neither of us cares

Rivals in our trenches, where the healing never starts

We've drawn the lines in dirt, but we’ve both torn apart

You build your truth in stone, I stack mine up in clay

We tend to what divides us, and let the roots decay

There's a question in the silence that neither wants to ask

Why we can't tear this wall down, instead we hold our masks

Gaslight and misinformation, both play our twisted game

But through the smoke, I wonder—do we even know our names?

Rivals in our trenches, staring across the line

We’re just two stubborn hearts, convinced that we're both right

No trust, no truth, no healing, just distance and despair

We're mending walls between us, and neither of us cares

Rivals in our trenches, where the healing never starts

We've drawn the lines in dirt, but we’ve both torn apart

"Good fences make good neighbors," so you always say

But what’s a wall that shuts us out, but keeps the hurt in play?

If I just reach across the line, could we somehow build a bridge?

Or are we forever digging deep into this bitter ridge?

Rivals in our trenches, staring across the line

We’re just two stubborn hearts, convinced that we're both right

No trust, no truth, no healing, just distance and despair

We're mending walls between us, and neither of us cares

Rivals in our trenches, where the healing never starts

We've drawn the lines in dirt, but we’ve both torn apart

We built these walls so high, thinking they’d protect

But all we've done is trap ourselves in the space where we forget

That rivals in the trenches are just people, after all

Who've built their walls so strong, they can't hear the other’s call

 

Here is Frost's poem for comparison- 

Mending Wall by Robert Frost

The narrative is that two neighbors meet each spring to mend a rock wall between their properties. The applications are deep and powerful to our discussion here:

Something there is that doesn’t love a wall,
That sends the frozen-ground-swell under it,
And spills the upper boulders in the sun;
And makes gaps even two can pass abreast.

The work of hunters is another thing:
I have come after them and made repair
Where they have left not one stone on a stone,
But they would have the rabbit out of hiding,
To please the yelping dogs. The gaps I mean,

No one has seen them made or heard them made,
But at spring mending-time we find them there.

I let my neighbor know beyond the hill;
And on a day we meet to walk the line
And set the wall between us once again.

We keep the wall between us as we go.

To each the boulders that have fallen to each.
And some are loaves and some so nearly balls
We have to use a spell to make them balance:

‘Stay where you are until our backs are turned!’

We wear our fingers rough with handling them.
Oh, just another kind of out-door game,

One on a side. It comes to little more:
There where it is we do not need the wall:

He is all pine and I am apple orchard.
My apple trees will never get across
And eat the cones under his pines, I tell him.
He only says, ‘Good fences make good neighbors.’

Spring is the mischief in me, and I wonder
If I could put a notion in his head:

‘Why do they make good neighbors? Isn’t it

Where there are cows? But here there are no cows.

Before I built a wall I’d ask to know
What I was walling in or walling out,
And to whom I was like to give offense.


Something there is that doesn't love a wall,

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